| 2005-06-04 00:39:06 |
Great Mom Pt.3
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Too much fucking. I could not do that much when I was 18. I know it's fiction but have the characters spend a paragraph doing something else like drinking a soda.... Get real.... |
| 2005-06-04 01:56:27 |
Great Mom Pt.3
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good story, great infact, lil heavy on the fuckin nut im not going to bitch on that. keep writen. titman, do you ever write your own stories, try it if you dont. |
| 2005-06-04 12:05:18 |
Great Mom Pt.3
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this story is fucking good.Great fucking story! |
| 2005-06-04 21:35:58 |
Great Mom Pt.3
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Holy shit!!!!!!!! This story was awesome, if u dont write more ill be pissed off. Any way ur good keep um cumming |
| 2005-06-04 22:25:19 |
Great Mom Pt.3
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utter crap 1/10 |