| 2005-06-19 05:31:28 |
My Sister Kelly Pt. 3
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Another great addition to the storyline. All of your stories have been great. All i gotta say is keep them up. You should keep the stories straight sex though. Cuz i have found that when a story goes from straight sex into bi/lez as well. It tends to ruin the story line alot. But thats just some advice. Whether you choose to use it or not is none of my concern. But once again. Great story. Keep em up. You will be hearing from me again. Peace out. |
| 2005-07-04 07:59:47 |
My Sister Kelly Pt. 3
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loved the story but it fucked up that you sucked the names up in pt 2 Tara became Tisha in pt 3 |
| 2005-07-04 20:53:58 |
My Sister Kelly Pt. 3
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Sorry about the name change, I thought I caught it before I posted it for review. |
| 2005-07-07 13:37:56 |
My Sister Kelly Pt. 3
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great fuckin story man.. keeeeeeep em commin |
| 2005-07-20 16:13:42 |
My Sister Kelly Pt. 3
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i wasnt too fond of it... |