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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-06-05 23:41:39 | O.C. Ass | u hav made a good start but dnot keep us waiting and hurry up and write the next part |
| 2005-06-06 18:23:35 | O.C. Ass | I love it, i love all your stories write more fast please |
| 2005-06-06 19:37:28 | O.C. Ass | I hate that frickin show the OC. Orange County should be made fun of, not idolized |
| 2005-06-07 00:18:24 | O.C. Ass | Uh.... she actually lives in Orange County dude, just a coincidence. May as well p[lay on it for a title |
| 2005-06-07 00:46:37 | O.C. Ass | That was really short...i read that in like 5 minutes...and wasn't even turned on. You need to slow it down a little, and elaborate much more on the sex. Not bad of a start though... Until I see the rest its only a 5/10 |