| 2004-08-27 14:18:31 |
Jen's Side :The Sleepover
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idd, a bit more details and more of a story would have made it better but I don't think it's bad, your writing just needs a little brushing up |
| 2004-09-01 17:36:06 |
Jen's Side :The Sleepover
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it wasn't that good. Sex doesn't feel good if you're being rape.dd |
| 2004-09-09 09:22:32 |
Jen's Side :The Sleepover
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yeah it was kool i'd love to here the continued story though |
| 2004-09-26 15:56:22 |
Jen's Side :The Sleepover
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Rape is against moral law, and is mostly used for power over some one. This girl never had a chance, and the big dicked guy should have his cock cut off. |
| 2004-10-12 21:40:25 |
Jen's Side :The Sleepover
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no shit she's a virgin, she's 12! no detail at all... |