| 2007-02-22 18:03:45 |
Class Reunion_(1)
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Pretty bad rather stupid. |
| 2007-11-30 00:31:20 |
Class Reunion_(1)
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Very well-written. Nice plot and a little bit sad. This would have been a good short story without the explicit sex. How many times does that happen? (Never!) |
| 2007-12-13 23:01:12 |
Class Reunion_(1)
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It looked like someone had gone to the dollar store and spent their whole check --- hahahahaha :D... Great story. Really. I almost want to meet you :) |
| 2004-08-27 00:54:43 |
First Contact_(0)
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learn some english and syntax, then try to write |
| 2004-08-30 00:39:24 |
First Contact_(0)
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Dude you need to learn how to write, type and use the correct grammer. Also read up on love making techniques. And Practice practice, practice, your writing, typing, and loving. |