| 2005-01-14 05:48:31 |
The Arranged Marriage
|
one small point, Kyra spent all day and evening after the weeding in her weddig dress...while Gabriel got changed... |
| 2005-02-08 14:37:29 |
The Arranged Marriage
|
A well writen and well concieved story. It held my attention right from the start to finish. I printed it to share with others. Luved it. |
| 2005-04-02 01:48:01 |
The Arranged Marriage
|
OMG. i about fucking cummed just by reading this. My whole body was hot and I was short of breath. I must have more. You must write more! |
| 2005-04-02 20:00:30 |
The Arranged Marriage
|
that was great!! i loved made me tingle inside |
| 2005-04-27 17:02:34 |
The Arranged Marriage
|
One of the best stories. |