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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-05-28 23:26:40 | a lesson in cock teasing | Wonderful story. Ignore GT. It doesn't have to be believable. That's why they call it fiction. |
| 2005-06-07 00:52:06 | a lesson in cock teasing | i like when stories are believable...but they dont have to be...i would perfer if you would check your grammer and spelling though. It was attrocious (i think that is spelled right...lol). Overall id give it a 6 because it was pretty good but...the grammer and spelling took away from it...not to mention it was kind of lame. i mean...meh...just...i dunno how you could fix it...it just didnt appeal to me in the least...sorry. |
| 2005-07-09 06:24:18 | a lesson in cock teasing | hey ..., the grammer was just fine |
| 2005-07-21 04:20:57 | a lesson in cock teasing | good story. not enough guys or dogs. l,,,,,want to join in, and FUCK, FUCK,FUCK! |
| 2006-02-26 03:04:00 | a lesson in cock teasing | I'd categorize this more as fantasy. 5 out of 10. Sentence structure and overall grammar didn't help the story much... |