| 2004-08-26 01:31:20 |
The Prophecy
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good story write more |
| 2004-08-27 09:07:02 |
The Prophecy
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very well handled, enjoyed it a lot. But the end is time less.. The man turns over and goes to sleep. Even if he isn't exactly a man.. |
| 2004-08-27 17:52:43 |
The Prophecy
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Good story I hope you write more like this.... |
| 2004-09-28 11:33:04 |
The Prophecy
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Change from the usual but an enjoyable read |
| 2004-11-08 20:57:49 |
The Prophecy
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Got boring after a while so i had to skip through half of it, sry man.. if your guna write a novel say so before hand ;) |