| 2007-09-27 22:22:26 |
The Prophecy
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too much plot too little sex |
| 2008-02-08 22:49:24 |
The Prophecy
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Dear readers who lack intelliegence: there is more to this story than just sex. For you nimrods-go to another site to get visual aid since reading obviously is not ur strong suit. To the author: great details and I look foward to more! -allykat |
| 2004-08-31 02:51:13 |
Girl From New England
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That was pretty good but it needs to be longer. You need to add more detail. It also ends aburptly which you should fix. Other then that good job. |
| 2004-09-24 09:05:37 |
Girl From New England
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I liked it |
| 2004-08-26 21:03:39 |
Math Student's Dream
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too interesting |