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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-06-20 18:49:10 | Careful What You Wish For_(0) | i aggree. you should describe the invoroment a little better... and how did it really end? have she found out that you were "behind" the rape? do you fist-fuck her now? are you still married? think about it... the current ending is very "flat"... well besides from the ending i think its was a great story... 8/10 |
| 2006-06-24 14:15:42 | Careful What You Wish For_(0) | Fucking cool.I love it.part 2 pls. -----susan |
| 2006-07-14 14:34:48 | Careful What You Wish For_(0) | just what the fuck was that |
| 2006-07-26 09:20:43 | Careful What You Wish For_(0) | If I took all of my criticism to heart I would never write again. The story ends this way in this version because there is a very rude part 2 on a different site...but which one of the 9 suggested endings did I use????? |
| 2006-08-14 10:04:24 | Careful What You Wish For_(0) | It was very well written, your ending was a little bland and final but then again I guess the poor girl was fucked to death! well done! |