| 2004-09-16 00:36:19 |
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My hat's off to the author of this. Impressive peice of work, keep writing. |
| 2004-09-16 16:28:03 |
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loved the storie but whats with all the numbers between the words :S |
| 2004-09-23 03:06:52 |
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i liked it alot... maybe you shouldnt repost storys though fucking cheat... But yeh :D if you gonna repost type before the story "This story wasnt originally My Work, Or I Wrote it along time ago and posted it a few Times.. thought i could bring back memorys?" |
| 2004-09-23 03:21:36 |
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dude that was garbage. i agree with half of the other people no girl that is a virgin in any way couldnt enjoy sex without a couple weeks of stretching so that was complete shit right there. and all those numbers were fucking gay to add in there. so when you feel like you can write an actual good story than feel free to. but if you cant write a good story than fuck your writing career its over now. |
| 2004-09-24 14:43:19 |
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Good and believable storie but next time its told shortin the dicks. No way the kid would be able to take that, and the father would have puked in the begining. |