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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-09-29 02:44:22 | Captured Family_(6) | its great, tho i cant read it all before i cum, ive tried to read this one 6 times and im still not thru it yet 10 |
| 2005-09-29 03:26:16 | Captured Family_(6) | You seemed in a big hurry to make the family do each other in as many ways possible, as quickly as possible. Just performing about a third of those sex acts would have probably sent each member fo that family into a catatonic shock! Sometimes less is really more. Flesh out your characters as to hair, eyes, shape, etc. so we can better envision their sexual assaults Great story concept, but lighten up the extent of their mutual humiliation. |
| 2005-09-29 12:54:40 | Captured Family_(6) | good good i liked how the girl squieeld lolz i loved it hope i get to fuck my sis tha same way as mark did to beck anywayz great story m8 keep em comin 100/10 brilliant! |
| 2005-09-29 13:25:55 | Captured Family_(6) | Great Story!!!!!! A+ all the way good job |
| 2005-10-01 02:45:16 | Captured Family_(6) | good story |