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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-06-22 13:31:51 | LITTLE LOO | I liked it and fuck those who didn't keep makin more |
| 2004-07-21 19:00:22 | LITTLE LOO | all the "try to be sensitive-stuff" seems a bit unnessesary considering the lame "I think I have a solution to your problem blablabla". This story suck, but then again most stories on this site is about one fifth the quality of the stories I usually read so maybe you shouldn't take it as something negative... Think your stories over a bit first, write it, then read and edit it, then re-read and re-edit it, if you want to write a good story look at other things but the obvious as well . Don't forget to learn from others and their mistakes either, to be a great writer you should read alot, it helps when you are building sentenses. Build up a strong vocabulary, learn alot of synonumus words or alternative phrasings so that if you have to repeat yourself, it won't sound repetative.Good Luc |
| 2004-08-04 13:30:14 | LITTLE LOO | I loved it! It made me long for some sweet pussy. YOu made it so real I could almost taste it.' Great |
| 2005-12-26 00:19:28 | LITTLE LOO | That's a pretty solid story. Could have used a bit more description of the physical appearances of the two, but the actual sex was good. |
| 2007-07-04 16:24:55 | LITTLE LOO | 10/10 |