| 2005-10-17 14:50:47 |
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Allfuckingright. I loved it. Well written with lots of details. Keep up the good work. |
| 2005-10-19 07:12:23 |
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fuking wrong but ok 6/10 |
| 2005-10-21 20:50:38 |
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got me off twice. good job |
| 2005-11-03 20:26:16 |
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lol ok i bealve soem psrt but if u blew ur load in her she would get prgnet even wiht the pill itts still 3/4 of a chance and as u descriped it she would have. but i belave you. lmfao its funny tho but its ur life u lived it noit me. bye the way im hidden bye clowns behinde to lesbain haveigbn sex u cant see me now |
| 2005-12-09 06:18:58 |
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i think the story was great. fucking awsome. i have a sister thing. very good detail, i assume ur english with the wording. i could be longer , try to build it up by putting more detail. if the relationship was/is true there should be more emotion and details as to why that is. if its fake i still say its good. i give it a 8/10 for its lack of build up and detail. a good example of this is the story "SARA FOLLOWED ME" . |