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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-11-02 20:10:58 | Alien Seduction | i dont get it are the aliens pervs or somin anyway if u write a second make it have more stuff bout aliens |
| 2005-01-02 00:48:05 | Alien Seduction | ook i have read alot of storys and this one sucked major ass dude the only part about aliens was near end!!?? lol FREAK |
| 2005-03-10 16:04:57 | Alien Seduction | you ppl r terrible literary analysts excuse my gramar but im typing ewith one hand (broken fingers in left) there was deffinitely ot enough alienness, but overall well written for futur refference, repetition of words makes u sound stupid and makes reading boring and happes far too often in these stories, i enjoyed your lack thereof this was sort of funny, and the sex seemed natural, good i give it a 6/10 oh and say nispy out loud as fast as u can nispy-nispy-nispy-nisp... |
| 2005-03-23 05:18:13 | Alien Seduction | hey yea yea good story i dun get da bispy stuff is it supposed to sound lik penis? |
| 2005-04-24 19:30:46 | Alien Seduction | needs something, more color maybe. |