| 2005-04-21 14:34:00 |
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Thanks guys...the negative comments and very low scores on my recent stories are putting me off posting here...what should I do? |
| 2005-04-30 18:21:31 |
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well that was pretty good i meen i masturbated but i read onether on and i think it sounded better plus im not sure it even happened i meen how can i no? |
| 2005-05-03 10:41:51 |
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i read it twice in a row and still nothin IT SUCKS |
| 2005-05-10 21:40:12 |
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Good read Amy. Perhaps, as a writer, as I am. Think in fantasy, let your emotions carry the story line...food for thought. Don't give up, looking forward to your next story |
| 2005-05-26 09:59:42 |
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oh ,its an amazing story ,because its full of sucpense |