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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-12-09 06:08:48 | Episode 3 Of The Adventures of John and Holly | yah thats good |
| 2004-12-09 23:09:57 | Episode 3 Of The Adventures of John and Holly | ummm.... is that the end!?!? it seems like an ending. Where is it going to go from that monogamy statement? |
| 2004-12-10 15:51:10 | Episode 3 Of The Adventures of John and Holly | Damb that part about Holly was wierd. I never new girls could be so mean. Holly's got seriece issues with her love life she needs to be more careful the nympho. I know this sound wierd like it's comeing form an adult but i fill sorry for Holly. She real nice though and i'd love to eat her pussy. Good job but no more Holly views. |
| 2004-12-11 07:17:35 | Episode 3 Of The Adventures of John and Holly | nice story |
| 2004-12-17 11:06:07 | Episode 3 Of The Adventures of John and Holly | although it makes an intriguing if dissapointing ending, thats not the ending. I have submitted parts 37-41, and 42 and 43 are done, just need to look them over again, and that constitutes all of episode IV so, look for that. If you are wondering, episode 3's, Holly centered, emotional roller coaster, is a large departure from the rest of the series. Episode 4 brings it back to the style from before. I am working through ideas of how to do 5 right now, but im not sure if i will do it, these seem to be getting too repeptitive to be worth doing...maybe i will just write one long story that tells the story of their future without being IN the moment...if that makes sense. |