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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-04-13 16:08:18 | Phoenix ch 11 | yo more sex and less hex and less WAR!!!!!! |
| 2005-06-10 02:50:42 | Phoenix ch 11 | (Barons know Munich very well *wink*) funny how this story just draws me more and more in. It's moving towards great not just simpjy very good anymore. (though most German girls are shaving themselves bald these days ...Munich being the trendiest of most cities.) Regardless, excellent ...thank you. |
| 2004-09-09 08:49:33 | No longer a fantasy | Still pretty weak |
| 2004-09-09 22:10:52 | No longer a fantasy | Oh well, I will try again in third person so I can more effectively fill out the characters and make you all cum harder. Thanks for the comment. |
| 2004-09-24 16:34:53 | No longer a fantasy | Just to let you know, I see where Goomba wrote, still pretty weak. 1. I want to know why he thinks its weak? I love people who say its good or bad and don't tell you anything else so you can't make it better. But anyway, getting off my high horse, I think the story is fairly good and you might find writing in the third person a little harder if anything. The trick is just KNOW your character. If someone said whats His favorite color you should know without thinking. not that it will be the same as yours, but still. I see his favorite color as red, firey and confusing.... all in all, good work. |