| 2004-09-09 11:52:30 |
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ah it was'nt that bad but since the one girl has Jess hot for her you should exploit this now this girl makes Jess do anything she wants .Like masturbate in front of her brother' mother'Aunt and in public seduce beautiful women that this girl has hot's for and remember voyuerism |
| 2004-09-27 09:48:22 |
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that was SAd and pitttful |
| 2004-10-07 11:11:35 |
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you should have made it longer |
| 2005-01-10 12:33:51 |
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Would have been more effective with different names from your other series. But still promising, I'll keep reading |
| 2005-09-15 19:13:41 |
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shadow jones lol omg that was so bad i expected better way better i rate it 3/10 |