| 2005-03-18 10:05:34 |
Hispanic realtor
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WIsh I had a real estate hottie *showing around* a house to me!! |
| 2005-04-13 18:35:44 |
Hispanic realtor
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was kinda of boring you should have more foreplay about how they got excited not just write she he's cock and fucked.... com up with something original and make her more latina i didn't feel like she was a latina |
| 2005-12-02 16:41:43 |
Hispanic realtor
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Allow me to first compliment you on a nice story. The flow and ebb is good and, unlike many of the utterly uncouth stories on this site, you strike a nice blend between fantastical raunchiness and plausible reality. Do keep writing. I concur, however, with latino; you should do more to bring out the "latina" qualities. be descriptive. i think teach's suggestion of sprinkling in some spanish is a good one! best of luck. |
| 2008-02-24 01:42:34 |
Hispanic realtor
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I want to fuck, mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm |
| 2008-03-16 21:57:08 |
Hispanic realtor
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makes me hard, I need to check my FICO and look at houses |