| 2005-07-28 15:13:15 |
A Holiday with Friends
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it was cool very creative these guys bashing the story need to try writing themselves, they probably cant even get past ah sentence, keep up the goo work man |
| 2005-10-19 19:52:15 |
A Holiday with Friends
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Not very good long story and not good |
| 2006-03-25 22:52:27 |
A Holiday with Friends
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you are all a bunch of sick fucks. whoever wrote this has problems. i bet you are one of those guys that cuts his vas difrance (vien on bottom of dick) then wacks off to see if the jiz will still come out. peace and chicken grease. |
| 2008-02-19 21:56:06 |
A Holiday with Friends
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This story was very good! All you who are putting it down like the assholes you are, need to do like "Noone important" says and try and write a story of your own. If you don't like it, its probably because you are the sick bastard who'd do such things as brutal and merciless rape. I really enjoyed this, especially the end, that was brilliant! Payback is a bitch! |
| 2004-09-09 19:39:27 |
Rape of Molly
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Well written, enjoyed it :) |