| 2004-09-13 19:51:32 |
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Great Story..I love the way you introduce more characters even if is just for a short time.. By the time this is over i'm gonna guess there like 6-7 people living in the house in a constant orgy.. LOL |
| 2004-09-13 19:51:32 |
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Great Story..I love the way you introduce more characters even if is just for a short time.. By the time this is over i'm gonna guess there like 6-7 people living in the house in a constant orgy.. LOL |
| 2004-09-13 22:20:27 |
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Bug eyed is what reading your stories has done to me.there is nothing wrong with the content, but the way you structure your stories needs alot of work. |
| 2004-09-15 19:49:22 |
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john... you're obviously getting bored and tired and the stories aren't as good anymore. plus, w/ 19 stories, well... there's only so much you can do. on to the legit stuff! come back when you're refreshed! |
| 2004-09-16 18:37:16 |
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I am starting to see a flaw in this voting system. This part is rated lower than Part II ?? i don't understand that at all. I think that if i made all these into one big story, or maybe two big stories, instead of posting them seperately by part, they would get much higher ratings. Look at The Camp nurse, It is a good story, but it really should be divided down into smaller ones, and it is quite repeptive, with some very weird stuff, i think you know what i mean. So i feel that longer stories are rated higher than they should be. Maybe i should just post the next two or three as one.... tell me what you think |