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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-04-06 01:50:55 | Backstage Pass_(0) | well go read one of them then cause we dont need someone like u here screwing up the vibe queer |
| 2004-09-13 19:45:20 | Part XVIII: Return | You are a great writer and need to keep these up. The only thing i ever see wrong in your stories is the fact you dont put appropriate paragraphs. I personally think your longer stories are better.. I also like the fact that you have a road map and it goes through there lives from each story.. Pllus there characters coming and going from time to time is a great idea for the fact that it helps keep the story fresh and exciting, because you dont know whos gonna be in the next story!! I hope my comments help you in ur decision! Plus give it sometime for people to read/post because there are so many stories! |
| 2004-09-15 15:13:29 | Part XVIII: Return | Your stories are great never stop you shoulc cont love them |
| 2004-09-15 18:38:49 | Part XVIII: Return | i think you should really keep writing these stories. i know whenever i go to the top stories and i see part... i rush to your name to go and read the ones i haven't seen yet. oh, and yes. i did read them in order once i found them all. i read 8 then 5 then 1- wherever you lead us to. if you like writing the stories, continue. if not, you're right, they are gonna become forced and dull and i know writing these things is difficult... i've posted 2 stories... i started writing at the request of my boyfriend. i don't know if i'm gonna continue but of course my stories don't have the following that yours do. keep up the good work... or at least keep writing... and please write a romance sometime! oh... and when you become legit, write another story w/ a comment w/ the name of the book |
| 2004-10-01 00:10:40 | Part XVIII: Return | You want longer comments, here's longer. 1) These are damn good, keep them up. 2) The same stuff gets boring when you do it a hundred times, so make sure you mix it up a lot. You've been doing that well(e.g., porn trip to LA), but be sure to keep it up. 3) Minor point, but paragraph better. When I'm scrolling down the page trying to keep the story coming and I can't figure out where I left off because it's just a wall of text, that's bad. 4) Plot, if done properly, is a very good thing. I don't expect an insane amount(this isn't Death by Fucking, which is as much sci-fi novel as porn story), but keep enough in that it stays interesting and fresh, as well as giving me a reason to come back to the same storyline next time. Generally, you're doing this all right, just be sure to keep it up. |