| 2005-05-05 23:22:05 |
Little sister sucks it
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not bad, but you need more action and a better build-up. Other than that good job. |
| 2005-05-09 09:09:27 |
Little sister sucks it
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7/10. i'm not sure who posted that other god comment (because i'm the only one who has the name god and people who copy me are gonna make other people confused)but that person is wrong this story is good i like blackmail gives you power. |
| 2005-05-29 22:29:45 |
Little sister sucks it
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Good potential but you move the action too abruptly ...Sis goes down on him too quickly...then sucks expertly....then is sickened by his c*m????? |
| 2005-06-09 10:57:08 |
Little sister sucks it
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HE NEEDS TO TAKE HER CHERRY. IT SOUNDS LIKE SHE WOULD LIKE A HARD COCK IN HER CUNT AND ASSHOLE. THEN HE COULD HAVE HER BRING THE OTHER CHEERLEADERS OVER. THEY COULD PARTY WITH HIM FUCKING THEIR CUNTS AND WITH HER EATING HIS CUM FROM THEIR FRESH FUCKED PUSSIES. WITH HIS FILM, HE COULD HAVE A NICE FRESH CUNT AND ASS TO FUCK EVERY DAY. |
| 2005-06-14 17:05:30 |
Little sister sucks it
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Way too short. need to bulk it up a little |