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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-01-21 00:46:31 | Birthday surprise_(3) | One word SPELLCHECK Its wrought iron not rod iron.... Also manny more errors. Asside from that and the lack of plot, detail, and every other literary element this story still sucked. |
| 2007-05-25 18:33:32 | Birthday surprise_(3) | Total gibberish |
| 2004-10-11 08:49:24 | Chronicles of Depravity #3 | I mean, it was a good story until now. The rape part was neither arousing nor funny. Better leave that out in the future. It would make your story much more enjoyable! |
| 2004-11-01 20:58:48 | Chronicles of Depravity #3 | Keep writing, but try polishing your work. You have great imagination. |
| 2004-11-21 05:43:38 | Chronicles of Depravity #3 | pretty good, made me shoot my load |