| 2005-02-26 15:00:03 |
Raping Julie
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The grammar was so bad i couldn't even finish the story. Use SPELL CHECK, dammit. A grammar checker is part of the programming. Good idea, though, what little i read. |
| 2005-03-11 03:54:13 |
Raping Julie
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shit, i thought it was great! you got 10 points from me. |
| 2005-03-14 06:25:02 |
Raping Julie
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poor. 4/10. do what orchid says goddammit! and please this is a plea to all wroters out there shit or not if you are going to wrote make sure your grammar isn't bad or has spelling mistakes. it is a key ingredient to getting people's attention. |
| 2005-03-14 23:58:52 |
Raping Julie
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Nice Story, Rape portion was week. Who gives a shit about grammer. |
| 2005-03-16 18:48:28 |
Raping Julie
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beautifull just beautifull rough violent who could ask for more |