| 2004-09-30 18:04:47 |
One Condom
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this was actually pretty descent. It didn't have all this shit that people right then say that it was a true story. This actually sounded more true than rue stories. However, it could use some description. All in all, nice job. |
| 2004-09-30 18:34:09 |
One Condom
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a pile of cheap shit, i could write better meself |
| 2004-09-30 20:53:11 |
One Condom
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fuck it needs pics oor something |
| 2004-09-30 22:06:18 |
One Condom
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Well, im only 13 what u expect..... |
| 2004-10-01 17:23:48 |
One Condom
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good story. needs some work, but all in all, good. keep writing |