| 2006-06-29 01:35:34 |
One Condom
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good story just make it longer in the sex part, such as more foreplay and more fucking and dont listen to these other fuckers |
| 2006-07-01 23:19:42 |
One Condom
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your a virgin |
| 2006-08-01 13:47:23 |
One Condom
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???????????????????????????... |
| 2006-10-22 04:07:41 |
One Condom
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Hmm... I'm honestly of mixed opinions about this story. The basic premise of the story is a stretch, but not unbelievable. There certainly was not enough description given to the sexual acts, but if you fix that, it will fix the length of the sexual acts as well. Of course, I'm by no means an author on here, and I only do short stories when I'm bored, so this is just the advice of a fellow porn-o-holic. /| MidnightFiend /| |
| 2006-10-22 04:22:11 |
One Condom
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Sorry, but I have to say this. After reading the comments on here... Folks, please, I think all of us are getting tired of having to say this... If you read the word Incest in the description, you should already know that it has such, so don't flame the kid for your lack of attention. And yes folks, he is 13, if you had bothered to, again, read the description, you would have seen that. /| MidnightFiend /| |