| 2004-10-03 22:27:32 |
My friend Natalie
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nice story.needs more detail though. overall--9/10. |
| 2004-10-03 23:58:14 |
My friend Natalie
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Not a bad story. Should have spell checked, though. |
| 2004-10-04 02:00:29 |
My friend Natalie
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Not to bad of a story..perhaps write a contiuation..the characters certainly have it in them. |
| 2004-10-05 08:08:52 |
My friend Natalie
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thanks for all your comments |
| 2004-10-09 20:11:21 |
My friend Natalie
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very nice story. im interested in reading more stories about there characters, i think a series has great potential, keep writing. 9/10 |