| 2004-10-11 13:30:50 |
My best friend's dad
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That was the best sotry I have ever read. I could feel every inch of emotion and I shivered in delight. Loved it. |
| 2004-10-11 19:08:24 |
My best friend's dad
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Wow, i read that with my roomate sitting right next to me. (She didn't know what i was reading). I felt wet in my jeans and could picture the entire story. |
| 2004-10-12 13:45:01 |
My best friend's dad
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Great story! Really painted a picture in my mind. Keep writing. You have real talent. |
| 2004-10-13 20:26:27 |
My best friend's dad
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WOW!!!! Very nice! Keep up the writing. Held my interest the whole time!!!! |
| 2004-10-15 11:42:29 |
My best friend's dad
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A breath of fresh air, pardon the cliche, that's what this story has proven to be. A true female perspective is rare in this forum. I hope you'll continue to post your text, and that your not a sleazy man from Denver. |