| 2004-11-10 20:43:35 |
My cousin Louise and aunt Carol
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My younger brother wants to do me like louiseand caroland i want to very much too. |
| 2004-12-08 17:43:48 |
My cousin Louise and aunt Carol
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Good action well done, keep on writing. |
| 2004-12-26 04:44:53 |
My cousin Louise and aunt Carol
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good start, u should add some more suspense, dont rush to the lovemaking too fast. also the cousin's name changed in the story. Proofread a story a couple times before submitting. other words i'd give it an 8. keep up the good work! |
| 2005-01-11 18:21:06 |
My cousin Louise and aunt Carol
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good story needs to be longer tho |
| 2005-01-16 12:21:04 |
My cousin Louise and aunt Carol
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How the hell can you change a character's name in mid-story It was Louise and Carol then it was Natalie? stupid wankers learn how to spell |