| 2006-04-06 06:08:50 |
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i LIKED THE WAY YOU HAD A STORY LINE BEFORE YOU CUT TO THE SEX GREAT JOB. 10/10 KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!! |
| 2006-06-07 07:42:24 |
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very very nice, loved the way it was intertwined with a story. perhaps a little more descriptive focus on the sex scenes, but brilliantly done 9/10 |
| 2006-08-24 13:52:31 |
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it was great...................wri... a sequel, im waiting |
| 2007-01-14 01:13:18 |
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Iwanttofistgirls stupid. the story kicked ass. We dont have to let you know if we want a real story, theres one right here. |
| 2008-03-18 12:37:36 |
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this story is the best one i have ever read... i read it like a year ago and i read it again .. it still made me so horney. :) |