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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2004-10-11 05:34:53 | Stable Hand | Really really badly written and completely unbelievable. |
2004-11-12 14:29:09 | Stable Hand | Badly written. Good ide for a story thou |
2004-12-22 15:23:17 | Stable Hand | being a female i know that when i lost my virginity it hurt like hell..... but yet for this one there was no pain? and didnt he do anything to please u ?? im sorry this story just doesnt make much sense |
2005-02-06 20:03:11 | Stable Hand | To Angel, it dosen't hurt everybody when they loose their virginity-it kind of depends on the woman-some are hurt by it, and some-like myself-were not hurt very much by loosing their virginity. The story wasn't too great by the way. The sex went too quickly with not enough detail. |
2005-12-10 02:13:28 | Stable Hand | good concept...poorly written...you rushed through without any detail...what does Jack look like, how big was his cock these are things needed to know to paint a mental picture...nice effort...5/10 |