| 2004-10-25 02:16:29 |
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Presumption that readers are complete idiots who need a dictionary explanation at the beginning of the story (for a simple word) will not win you any positive feedback. That's what I think. |
| 2004-10-25 21:36:57 |
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| 2004-11-24 09:09:27 |
PENANCE_(1)
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Thank you for the input, Me. I did not mean to imply the readers were idiots in the least. I just noticed that technique used in another story and thought I might try it myself. Sorry if you were insulted. You need to relax. Your panties are wound too tight. |
| 2005-06-27 19:22:38 |
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i loved this story. i love how it was written |
| 2005-07-08 16:35:15 |
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Aaaahhhh! That felt good. I reaqlly like eating cum out of my wife too. I think I might like to see her like that. |