| 2004-06-14 11:20:01 |
Life Saver
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Not too bad, coulda been abit longer tho |
| 2005-12-30 11:17:30 |
Life Saver
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was ok but i do agree needed to b longer and more descriptive |
| 2007-01-29 01:59:18 |
Life Saver
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Nothing out of the ordinary,you can do much better keep it up. |
| 2004-04-18 03:23:42 |
Roommates_(1)
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I love little kids, i have sex with my monkey bubbles, i was once black but now im white, i speak like a girl and have had 987439847 plastic surgeries, i am best friends with Lucious Lips, the writer of this story, they suck at writing though |
| 2004-06-03 12:49:04 |
Roommates_(1)
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Good start. Probably should get more descriptive and lick and such and feel the moans in your clits and asses. Yummmmy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |