| 2005-12-02 12:45:34 |
My next door neighbour Joanne
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Thx for the comments |
| 2006-06-10 00:45:00 |
My next door neighbour Joanne
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Good little story. I enjoyed it. but work on the grammer |
| 2007-06-01 21:24:22 |
My next door neighbour Joanne
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Horrible story, grammar sucked, you make no sense with a lot of things. 3/10. |
| 2008-01-31 21:08:10 |
My next door neighbour Joanne
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Ya, it kinda happened too fast. I mean, all of a sudden she said eat me eat me? Yeah right. Maybe in a wet dream, but not in real life. 5/6 |
| 2004-10-15 15:11:48 |
1st Time - Sister-in-law
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Sucked. That's all there is to say. |