| 2004-12-07 07:20:08 |
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Ok, so here's what you need to do. You need to re-check your spelling since it really matters, also check your grammar and your reading comprehension those three things ar ereally important. One more thing this is a boring story so don't write again. |
| 2005-01-19 21:42:32 |
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Very good. Spelling messed it up a lil here and there but certainly a well made story. Keep em cumin |
| 2005-01-30 16:52:43 |
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It was a alright story, but check the spelling the next time. |
| 2007-01-05 16:54:11 |
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Go buy a 99 cent dictionary and while your at it...take some english lessons. Other than that the story was fucking awesome!! |
| 2007-10-24 06:14:01 |
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Hmm, a young virgin male, who rarely has an opportunity to meet (let alone fuck) any girls, yet he carries four condoms in his wallet? Wish my brother had been that well prepared when he took my cherry. I worried for weeks about being pregnant. |