| 2004-10-31 19:53:18 |
Red
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Hi there Pinky Toe. You're right of course! But this is about story number 24 I've posted here and I don't really want to write lengthy stories, discounting those which extend themselves by being called xxxx1, xxxx2 etc. The basic storyline for this was suggested to me by a lady who has offered some very constructive criticism both on and off this site and I do confess to getting a lot of amusement in the act of 'gunning down' illiterate wankers (literally .... as you suggest!). Thanks for your comment though. I appreciate your candour! |
| 2004-11-25 19:42:50 |
Red
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I've had second thoughts about this story. The theme is contrived and artificial even for fiction. Reaction has been mixed and readership slow ( the obscure title is probably to blame) although the rating for it is surprisingly high. One of the major faults with this site is that although the webmaster maintains that copyright remains vested with the author, writers have no way to remove texts from public view. If it was within my power I should certainly scrap this story. I think this will be the first piece I've written for this site which will fail to reach a readership of 3K within 3 months and until a readership reaches 5K, I can't think of it as a success. This doesn't feel like one of my stories and in future although I may develope suggestions for stories I won't use entire concept |
| 2005-02-16 18:31:22 |
Red
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GREAT STORY.;..IF THE READERS CONTINUE TO BAD MOUTH YOU, WHY DON'T THEY GET OFF THEIR LAZY ASSES AND WRITE THEIR OWN STORIES.... |
| 2006-11-06 05:24:51 |
Red
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I must be the last to read this story. I liked it! if anything it was too short, These guys could have been tumbling around that shack for hours if not days. My dirty mind is in overdrive. if anything give us more, more, lionel saxon |
| 2004-10-17 12:53:54 |
Halloween Treat_(1)
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lovely story i liked it |