| 2005-12-11 14:02:20 |
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You're an ok writer, but the story is crap. the introduction is even worse, you sad deprived motherfucker 1/10 |
| 2005-12-18 14:40:26 |
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this story was just a little confusing, but it was good none the less. an 8/10.
P.S. all of you A-holes who think this story is wrong can kiss my ass. Little girls are the best! |
| 2005-12-18 14:53:38 |
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Decent story, but not all that good.
try writing in the first person to make it better. oh, and by the way, this was extremely similar to your other story, "curious little christians" (besides the group sex part, which was HOT!! |
| 2005-12-28 12:38:49 |
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This story is really disturbing and sick. You should be ashamed of yourself for writing a piece of crap and filth like this. I hope you get arrested for having sex with underage girls, you piece of retarded monkey shit. 0/10 |
| 2005-12-29 11:59:47 |
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who writes this filth? what makes any of you sickos WANT to have sex with a little girl?! |