| 2004-08-03 13:02:09 |
THE SCHOOL FOR GIRLS: PART ONE
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i'd like too install something like that on my mother -in-law |
| 2004-05-11 18:15:07 |
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Oh my god that was so boring.And stop putting those damned exclamation points.You put 3 in every damn sentence.That makes it look so bad.Thats why no body's reading your horrible story and you're not gettin' any comments.uo damn fuckin' little bitch |
| 2006-04-21 19:27:20 |
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Whoever wrote the first comment here should be ashamed. First of all, if you're going to criticize someone else's story, learn to type like a human being. That includes grammar, capitalization, and spaces after periods. Secondly, get yourself a name that doesn't sound like someone barfing, "ufdhzsyg". As for Stephanie, I thought the story was fine, if poorly written. There is certainly room for improvement, but I like the track you're on. |
| 2008-01-29 03:19:45 |
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Stephanie, Please continue this! |
| 2004-05-11 18:15:07 |
SCHOOL FOR GIRLS: PART THREE
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Oh my god that was so boring.And stop putting those damned exclamation points.You put 3 in every damn sentence.That makes it look so bad.Thats why no body's reading your horrible story and you're not gettin' any comments.uo damn fuckin' little bitch |