| 2004-11-13 07:53:39 |
Retail Therapy
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I agree. Hot and well written. Not many surprises thou. |
| 2005-02-05 11:37:32 |
Retail Therapy
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Fantastic story, Barometz. Wonderfully composed, with gorgeous, highly visual images. I particularly liked the line, "The two tendons on her thighs were like a gothic arch, with her sweet pussy the keystone." Anyway, job well done. 10/10. |
| 2005-02-26 21:15:56 |
Retail Therapy
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good writing but alittle bit shorter |
| 2005-07-06 22:47:33 |
Retail Therapy
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wow... im speechless that story was one of the most well written stories i ever read here. lol a lil long but i was kept intrested keep up the great work |
| 2004-11-30 18:28:07 |
used part IV
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fucking gr8 but i think dat the small titted gal shud hav joined in with her boyfriend and her best frend wen he was licking her pussy and dildo fucking her |