| 2006-04-13 20:23:51 |
One lonely night
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you should try finishing your words. and you must be 18 to purchase proporty and play they lottery.----i realy believe you are a play boy at 17 ----ya dream on.make it more believable at least.--but i liked the story so i give it a 7. |
| 2006-12-23 15:35:52 |
One lonely night
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Ok Ok calm down look 1st of all if the guy was english he could win the lottery (over 15s) 2nd its a story and it somthing someone has wrote and took time on can we all be just a bit nice about it! ps i thought it was a good story! |
| 2007-05-27 00:32:07 |
One lonely night
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Name changed from Sarah to Samantha !!!! |
| 2007-06-28 15:15:36 |
One lonely night
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way too many logical errors in this story, many already pointed out. Don't be such a fuckass and lie about the true story!!! |
| 2004-10-21 17:54:25 |
Phoenix Pt 3 Ch 03
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that was gross... and bad |