| 2005-01-11 16:31:12 |
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one of the few well developed stories out there. good job! |
| 2005-01-12 02:26:23 |
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wow thats all i can say wow |
| 2005-01-12 17:04:25 |
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Great story, fun to read, detail was very good. I even got hard. 10/10 |
| 2005-01-13 00:16:43 |
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great story dude.................. 4get the negative comments..........but thats how some critics are..............u were great |
| 2005-01-19 00:29:05 |
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You are an amazing writer.Better then most i have seen in XNXX,Playboy,or even Penthouse Forum.Hope part 2 is just as good. |