| 2005-05-04 00:32:43 |
Suzy's Workout
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musta been good, i'm still hard. 7/10 |
| 2006-03-27 11:07:59 |
Suzy's Workout
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Not the worst story I've read. Definately leads into a part two. Keep writing.....Oz. |
| 2006-10-05 16:35:47 |
Tuckers Island 31-36
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You can not be serious, I didn't think that there was this much crap in the whole world, my advice would be stick to something that you can do, maybe sweep sidewalks? Because you certainly can't write... |
| 2004-11-04 11:01:25 |
Abduction_(0)
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Your story i good but long, too long. i'll give you a 7 |
| 2004-11-05 14:23:20 |
Abduction_(0)
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that was retarded. im sorry. the grammar and misspellings made it a tough read and the story line itself was just bad... for the sake of the rest of us, please don't write anymore... |