| 2004-11-10 03:15:57 |
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wot a family |
| 2004-11-10 16:00:03 |
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I agree with "E" about the grammar, or more likely, lack of proof reading. But ignoring that it was still "fucking" good. I'm giving it a 9, not a 6. |
| 2004-11-11 02:46:01 |
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Hi ! Its Me Again ... Nice Story .... But not as nice as the earlier 1's ... dude keep writing .. make him fuck all his 7 sisters and pls pls pls dont forget mama |
| 2004-11-11 23:00:28 |
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your fucking good!!keep it up!!! |
| 2004-11-13 13:10:38 |
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it's "believed", not "beloved". nice spelling. =P good story, though |