| 2006-07-09 11:09:39 |
Hallpass Part 1
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I would have rated this story better if the spelling had matched the plot. The plot and premise to the story were good but the gramatical errors make the piece hard to read and confusing. Otherwise awesome story; it so had me petting myself! |
| 2006-11-21 18:06:54 |
Hallpass Part 1
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omg its one spelling error dont cry about it |
| 2007-01-15 02:07:07 |
Hallpass Part 1
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another part please and soon |
| 2007-01-17 22:11:04 |
Hallpass Part 1
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speling is raely bads |
| 2007-03-07 08:32:06 |
Hallpass Part 1
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of course there were grammatical errors. He obviously had better things to do during english class, lol |