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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-09-26 22:17:18 | Sleepover_(2) | it was good |
| 2005-11-19 05:08:17 | Sleepover_(2) | I thought it was ok, i do agree with ooo yaa, you shouldn't have used thoughs words at all. it could be better and hotter. i would say work on it and try proofreading it before you send it out,k. |
| 2006-03-21 21:47:34 | Sleepover_(2) | u can say pussy and dildo and u said that she didnt have sex so y didnt u say more and tell her wat she felt and wat is with the baby talk pee hole and penus it is good but u need more fucking details and try to get things strait i have seen better storys better rit tten |
| 2006-04-24 10:27:35 | Sleepover_(2) | It says true story, but in this stary you say ''hell, I hadn'y even seen a boys thing yet. But in your true story "Brother and Me" you were only ten then and you sucked his cock. |
| 2006-08-17 19:57:13 | Sleepover_(2) | sucked |