| 2004-11-26 22:54:01 |
gypsy_(3)
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the sweaty old guy just made me want to throw up. and the dog? ew. i liked your details though, nice. |
| 2004-12-09 15:56:24 |
gypsy_(3)
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Are you twelve? This is something a kid would think about and giggle. Grow up. You have some writing skills. Do a real story. |
| 2005-01-31 16:23:34 |
gypsy_(3)
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Good story... Just didn't care for the dog in the dads ass |
| 2005-02-01 10:18:30 |
gypsy_(3)
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way over the top in regardes to orgasms. this author is living in a dream world. |
| 2005-02-08 17:13:21 |
gypsy_(3)
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not likly..but it was alright |