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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-11-19 20:37:26 | Sexy Schoolgirls | Like DjTricky said, too many commas, commas are meant to break a sentence by adding more description, not to add description. Otherwise very hot and I gave you an 8. |
| 2004-11-20 00:08:35 | Sexy Schoolgirls | MIy daughter says this story is too hot for her ,so i said she couldnt read any more. |
| 2004-11-21 01:48:21 | Sexy Schoolgirls | loved it..... mmmmm tasty |
| 2004-11-21 13:57:46 | Sexy Schoolgirls | Don't blame me for the commas - blame Word! ha, ha, ha. It was one of my earlier stories - I now know how to punctuate! I'm sorry if it stopped your enjoyment! |
| 2004-11-25 19:48:30 | Sexy Schoolgirls | fucking loved the story!!! |