| 2006-10-05 16:16:13 |
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ass learn how to spell |
| 2006-10-11 22:31:34 |
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Wow! a niece, ANOTHER FUCKHEAD that an't spell.
can't write, has no imagination and trys to send a
story to a publisher for OUR fucking en joy ment. I;ll
pass and watch porn. There you just get lousy actors |
| 2006-10-12 19:08:45 |
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hey douche bag, figure out how to use SPELL CHECK. Fuckin christ, that was the worst spelling i have ever seen. |
| 2006-11-05 01:52:29 |
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good |
| 2006-12-16 01:52:07 |
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Hey asshole, use more punctuation, pargraphs, spell check, etc. This story sounds like it was written by a 13 yaer old with a low iq. You are one dumb mother fucker. stick to jacking off you dipshit and let others write. too bad ratings dont go minus |